What is the ship? (A sea creature, a whirlpool, or something mechanical?)
I can keep going with this story or pivot to something else! If you want to continue, let me know: Strona33
The door to the galley swung open, slamming against the bulkhead. Sarah stumbled in, drenched and shivering. "The rudder's jammed. We're drifting toward the shelf." What is the ship
: A mechanical failure (jammed rudder) combined with a mysterious external force. Strona33
Should the tone stay , or should it turn into an action-adventure ?