: Cohesion issues often stem from awkwardly integrated facts or quotations [16]. Re-evaluate how evidence supports your thesis to avoid a "dropped-in" feel [16].
When a paper requires a "major revision" or a "revise and resubmit," it typically means the core content has merit, but the framework needs rebuilding [20, 23].
: If you can explain a point without overly complex jargon, do so [36]. Using your "speaking voice" to transcribe explanations can help make written ideas more accessible [36].
: Changing one major link in your argument often impacts the entire paper [5]. Be prepared for your final product to bear little resemblance to your first draft [5]. Minor Stylistic Revisions