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Elias looked at him. He saw the faint scar on Mark’s chin from a hiking trip in Oregon. He saw the sweater he’d bought Mark for his twenty-ninth birthday. He saw three years of shared grocery lists, inside jokes about bad horror movies, and the way they used to finish each other's sentences without trying. Let’s not, Elias said. Mark blinked, his thumb finally stilling. Let’s not what? Stay friends. let-s-not-stay-friends
We can still be friends, Mark said. His voice was hopeful, the kind of hope that felt like a heavy blanket on a humid day. I mean, we know each other better than anyone. It would be a waste to just… stop. Shift the (e
No, Elias countered softly. That’s what we did. But if I do those things now, I’ll be looking for the version of you that loved me. I’ll be waiting for you to reach across the table and take my hand. And when you don’t, because we’re 'just friends,' it’ll break my heart all over again every single Tuesday. He saw three years of shared grocery lists,
He walked out into the cool evening air, feeling lighter with every step, leaving the lukewarm coffee and the ghosts behind him.
Let’s not stay friends, Mark, Elias repeated, his hand on the door handle. Let's just be people who once loved each other very much. That’s enough.