Gritty, urban fantasy with a heavy emphasis on the "found family" aspect of the male-dominated sub-groups within the pard and the coven. Key Themes to Include:
Focus on the bond between Nathaniel and Micah . Instead of being secondary to Anita’s needs, explore their shared responsibility in managing the "Ardeur" and how they support each other’s stability during the height of the power surges. Incubus Dreams Fix (only male)
Fixing the "monster of the week" feel by giving the antagonists more depth and personal connection to the heroes. Gritty, urban fantasy with a heavy emphasis on
The weight of being an "Incubus" or "Succubus" figure and the toll it takes on a man's identity. Fixing the "monster of the week" feel by
Does this align with the you were thinking of, or should we lean more into the mythology of the incubus itself?
The "fix" addresses the often-criticized pacing of the original by having the male characters take a more proactive, unified stance in solving the central mystery, using their unique supernatural abilities (leopard senses and vampire charms) in tandem.