The characters often state exactly what they are feeling rather than letting their environment or actions reveal their internal state. To take this from a "flat" draft to a immersive experience, I’d suggest leaning into more sensory clues to ground the reader.

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Try to add subtext. Characters rarely say exactly what they mean when they’re under pressure.

“I find it much easier to cut than add, but I just can't maintain motivation without seeing the major scenes in print.” Write It Sideways · 15 years ago

Below are drafts for the most common interpretations based on current trends.